preliminary task 2

Scrren shots

These are screen shots for our evaluation

Freeze frames for powerpoints

Lone Dog Reveal and Feedback

Everyone revealed their final cuts in class and gave and received feedback. Our general feedback was positive, people liked the titles, soundtrack, editing, voiceover and the flow of the narrative.

Lone Dog

Today has definitely been a mark of change. In the media lesson this morning the whole group achieved a lot and implemented some changes suggested in the feedback gathered from the rough-cut reveal on Tuesday e.g. editing, titles etc. Also, Marcus and myself did some extra work during our free period in which we recorded and uploaded the voiceover, synced the music in time with the visuals and placed and positioned titles. The final cut is almost ready now, me and Marcus have already arranged to do some extra work tomorrow lunchtime when we can add further items such as the effects that were suggested on Tuesday, and we've also got the start of fridays lesson to do some final tweaking.

Feedback from rough cut

Generally the feedback was good but there were obvious things that people didn't mention such as editing needs to be worked on, music needs to go in with the video ect.
Other feedback was:
- Titles need to be done
- Effects need to be in there to make it more agent and that will help with the pace
- remove some diagetic noise to get rid of the camera noises and directions
- Good way to show the genre and subgenre
- Soundtrack works well with what were trying to get across
- There are good quick cuts in chase scenes that show the speed
From now on we don't have that much time to complete our product but people also said that it has big potential to be good